Jeremy Jay, 'A Place Where We Could Go' (K)

4
A Place Where We Could Go
Critical Mass
Label: K

by Josh Modell

Naïveté played right can be charming and/or mysterious -- see Daniel Johnston or Kimya Dawson -- but without a songwriting spark, willfully simple can sound badly underdone. Lanky young Jeremy Jay is not a technically good singer, but that's excusable; the problem is the palpable overconfidence he has in his debut album's half-baked songs. The finger-snapping, spoken-word vibe of "While the City Sleeps" comes off like a monologue from a high-school musical, while "The Living Dolls" clumsily merges indie rock with doo-wop. Those enraptured by every Beat Happening song ever -- BH's Calvin Johnson produced A Place Where We Could Go -- might find something to love here. Everybody else, not so much.

BUY:

iTunesAmazon

00:00 00:00 No Song Selected More info
00:00 00:00
placeholder
Now Playing
  • 1 Stardeath and White Dwarfs — Luminous Veil " 04:40
  • 2 Tuatara — Snakecharmer " 02:56
  • 3 Sleep — The Clarity " 09:51
  • 4 The Weeknd — King Of The Fall " 05:02
  • 5 Unicorns — Rocketship " 02:50
  • 6 Valentino Khan — Make Some Noise " 03:43
  • 7 Christopher Denny — Watch Me Shine " 04:28

SPIN is a member of SPIN Music Group, a division of BUZZMEDIA